Hadj

Hey there :) Great Poem! Again, I really like the way your format follows the flow of the poem. A small nitpick: "the state if mind" I think you meant ...

Hey there! Hadj battling here for review day victory :) Ouch. This was violent, creepy, and really amazing :) It was interesting and unexpected to have an angel attacking the ...

Hey there! Hadj here to review! Nice poem. Short and to the point. You captured the feeling of modern people, bottling up all of their emotions and never just screaming ...

Hey there! Hadj reviewing for review day! *cough cough blue team will win cough cough* Anyways, this is a nice poem :) Its category of "Fantasy" was very misleading and ...

Ouch *Hadj hides under bed* This was painful...yet also very powerful My favorite part about this poem was how unique it is. Most people are too scared (or normal) to ...

Hey there! Hadj here for review day! Nice poem, it captures a lot of nationalism :) A few nitpicks: "These thought in their minds ring" Should be either "This thought" ...

Woah! Powerful poem here! You really made me think. It was fill of personification and intense detail. This was my favorite line by the way :P "The sun has not ...

Woah. Deep. Real nice rhyme scheme as well :) (I like rhyme schemes) :P Anyways, this poem really made me think. I especially liked the lines: "With the perfect weapons ...

Hi there! Some nice improvements :) A small nitpick: "break the ice by introducing her self" should be "break the ice by introducing herself" I would continue to describe how ...

Hey there! Great poem! The formatting really emphasizes the idea of a "broken mind" :) The poem is short, and there really isn't anything to criticize. It was very realatable, ...

Hey there! I just woke up, and I have to go, so this might be a bit short. Overall, very nice poem! It captured the sorrow of when someone dies ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! This is a pretty good start :) Any little nitpicks I found, Iggy already pointed out, so I'll get to the point. This is pretty ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS :D This is a really nice poem, short, but sweet :) I really like the lines: "I see your footsteps everywhere I go, I cannot ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! A few nitpicks: "but I wasn't for I walked strait to my grave" Should be "straight" "I was sure that time that it would lose" Either ...

Hey there! Nice poem! It gives a very different perspective on rain which is usually viewed as miserable and annoying. In the last stanza you write: "No longer as slight ...