HJYoung

HJ with a rather short review(sorry, im kinda busy at the moment) Before Read: Interesting Name Lets get to the review! First off, great exposition! The characters are well described, ...

u la laaa Noice! HJ here with a review! Before reading: the name was interesting After reading: woah On with the review! Hm short, but beautiful. I like your descriptive, ...

Review timeeeeee!!!!! Uh, the title was interesting, so i clicked it, just like @ForeverYoung299 Noice another poem about love! Never gets old. On to the review: Overall-10/10 Remark: Beautiful. The ...

HJ here with a review! Wow lots of fancy language! Anyways, on to the review. I feel the first sentence is probably one of the most important parts of your ...

Hey, HJ here with a review. I haven’t read any of the other chapters, but you are a very good writer. Really! Ok, now for the review-I very much like ...

Well, first of all, great formatting and colors! I agree that labelling people based on a certain aspect of themselves is the result of human bigotry and ignorance, and that ...

Bravo! I like it. You used a lot of descriptive metaphors, like 'wondering if the seed we planted made u grow a farm', This is about a person falling out ...

Jeez well thats a LONG poem. I can see that this is about unrequited love, and how you use the metaphor of a unwanted old toy on the shelf is ...

Wow, um i dont know where to start! First off, i like the level of detail and the advanced vocabulary you used to describe the setting-I think this may be ...

Wow! This is nice, such a plot twist at the end. The therapist becomes the one having therapy! The only issues I can see is with your punctuation where you ...

I like the rhyme in the first two lines, "The wind; be it slow or fast Make us forget our past" I like the use of a variety of metaphors, ...