Not a single day goes by when I don't think of you
Each day I wish we could be together
It just keeps getting harder and harder
Yet I still hope that text was from no one but you
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Hearing your name made me a little insane
You brightened my path in my darkest times
You were the reason I kept on tryin'
But now I'm scared to fall in love again
~~
I'm barricading my feelings and emotions
I'm scared cause eventually they'll come right through
I'm not ready to feel the pain and tensions
Feeling very weak I dunno whether i'll make it through
~~
Who would have ever thought you would mean this much to me?
It took me only a few days to completely fall in love with you
I'm sorry I made things awkward, I'm sorry I'm not impeccable
I'm hoping that you are not mad at me
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Afraid to face my feelings and emotions
Like a herd of bulls, they will all come charging right through
Too afraid to face all the pain and tensions
Feeling very weak I dunno whether i'll make it through
~~
Just hearing your name made my smiles inevitable
Feels like it was yesterday when I first fell for you
I'm sorry I made things awkward, I'm sorry I'm not impeccable
Cause deep inside, I don't wanna continue without you
~~
I don't wanna have to face heartbreak again
Please just promise me you won't come back
Cause I don't wanna hurt you the same way you did me back
In the end, I'm too scared to fall in love again
~~
Not a single day went by when I didn't think of you
Each day I wished we could've been together
It just kept on becoming harder and harder
But deep down, I don't wanna continue without you
~~
So don't you dare come back and stab my heart with that knife
I trusted you with it, now my heart is bleeding for life
I'd never want to hurt you, even though I'm in pain
Because in the end…. I'm too scared to fall in love again
This was honestly so heartfelt!
I loved every line of it as it really showed your true emotions when you were in a certain state of mine. I hope your alr now! My PM's are open to both you and someone who is just casually looking through the reviews 
Stay safe and keep writing,
Love Rubes x
Review timeeeeee!!!!!
Uh, the title was interesting, so i clicked it, just like @ForeverYoung299
Noice another poem about love! Never gets old.
On to the review:
Overall-10/10
Remark: Beautiful.
The poem was great! Great descriptive text, great metaphors(herd of bulls), and no errors with spelling or anything else. I loved the way you conveyed the speakers heartbreak and longing, 'i hope that text was from no one but you', and how you did some pretty nice rhymes. Make more poems, I'll be looking forward to it!
Hello. Here for a review.
Before reading: The title made me to come here and check it out.
After reading: In one word, this was awesome.
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Yet still I hope that text was from no one but you
You were the reason I kept on tryin'
I'm scared cuz eventually they'll come right through
It took me a few days to completely fall in love with you
So don't you dare come back and stab my heart with that knife
I trusted you with it, now my heart is bleeding for life
I'd never want to hurt you, even though I'm in pain
Cuz in the end…. I'm too scared to fall in love again
Something went wrong with the editing which explains why there is no space between the stanzas, each stanza is four lines FYI
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