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Hey there! I'm going straight to the point. Your poem is good, but it needs just a bit more details and it would be nicer if you made it just ...

Hi there! I don't have much time, so I'll get straight to the point. :D I think you did quite well in expressing the feeling of pain through your poem. ...

Hi there! I'm not much of a reviewer but I think you're a great writer. You've definitely got the rhyming going on well. However, I admit that I found some ...

Hey there! The first thing I'd like to say is: "Wow!!". I loved the spooky sense of it. :D The poem as a whole is quite well, but it needs ...

Hey there! I'm so glad I got my hands on one of your poems. :D As usual, your poem is absolutely fascinating. However, I'll try to write you a review. ...

Hi there A.S! :D I must say, your poem is absolutely fascinating! :) The emotions and idea is quite clear and I must say, you did a hell of a ...

Hi there! I'm not such a good reviewer, but here's something I quite noticed and think it needs a bit of fixing: "The love is the truth. My Wife is ...

Hi there! I congratulate you on your superb poem. The meaning is easily understood and your diction is quite breath-taking. The rhyming and flow of the poem is absolutely awesome. ...

Hey there Shoaib! I'll try to give you the best review I can. First, I think you can apply the following structure: "fed up [with] your made up smiles" Second, ...

Wow!I love it!That's exactly how I've been feeling for the past few months. I think it's absolutely perfect!Well done! One last thing, do you mind if I copy it to ...

Hi there, I liked the context and meaning of your poem, but honestly, I think it doesn't flow very well. It feels like you were focusing on the rhyming more ...

Hi there! I've got to admit how nice your story is. It totally grabbed my attention, truly fascinating! Well done! I don't think it needs fixing, but there is one ...

Hi there! I love the story. However, I admit it isn't very new. I don't want to discourage you or anything, you're actually really good and writing is about expressing ...

(while our teacher wasn’t looking.) (The three of them walked off, leaving me alone on the dark, eerie cliff, alone.) I don't get it. Where are they? Are they in ...

Hi!This is excellent! I think it's a bit long, but I'm no expert. I didn't notice anything wrong or mysterious, but there's one thing: (around neck) I think you ought ...