GryphonFledgling

You're probably going to hear this a lot, but I really liked this. I'm not a poetry critic, so I can't really give you 'feedback.' but I can just say ...

Wow, I loved this. It just flowed like a song. I was thinking it to music when I read it, it just sounded so right. It's a great love poem ...

I disagree a bit with Cade with her comment about the poem revolving around the rhyme scheme. Think about haiku and sonnets. They are hugely dependent on their schemes. I ...

I liked it. It was short and abstract, but it had great imagery and leaves a lot to be interpreted. It makes the reader have to imagine things. Not many ...

Is this a metaphor for Christianity? It may not be, but the way that 'Savior' was capitalized, that was the way I took it. Either way, it was a beautiful ...

Really pretty. I'm not a poetry critic, so I can't help you in that way, but I can say that I liked this. It scars my ear drums That is ...

This so true. I loved it. I'm no good at math and I love the power of words. I'm not a poetry critic, but I think that the poem was ...

Yes, I agree with Silly Sydestix up there. That was most definitely my favorite part. I'm not much of a poetry critic, so I couldn't tell you with an informed ...

Wow, I really liked this. I dabble in poetry at the most, so I can't critique, but I figure praise is good too. This was just so vivid. I could ...

This was really good. I'm not much of a poetry writer myself, so I can't really critique, but I do like the use of periods rather than commas. Each is ...

Hehe. Be Bop is the kind of person I would hang out with because I felt sorry for him. You seem to have confusion about the difference between 'your' and ...

The sun shone down, upon the silent street. Delete the comma between 'down' and upon'. Fluffy white clouds, hung in the clear blue sky. The tall lush green trees, swayed ...

This was interesting. The whole time I was trying to figure out what was going on. Was it a dream? April Fool's Day? I couldn't figure it out. Great ending. ...

This sounds like me, though the distractions vary from time to time... Books, my writing, movies, cleaning my room... There are a million things you can to do avoid homework... ...

:lol: That has got to be the stupidest thing I have every read. I cracked up reading it. Go you for putting that guy in his place. I'm not even ...