Gristlecharm

Hi there. I have read your work and I think the tone and style is very prim and concise. I like that because it makes it easier to read. Your ...

Hello. As I have come to this work most recently, compared with your other efforts I find this one to be more poetic. It almost doesn't fit with the tone ...

Hello. I think there is some real hidden romance hidden behind the words in this song. It's like the person narrating it has such an eye for detail when describing ...

Hey again. Since I came to this song after "Adam's Pole Dance" I found a striking contrast in the styles of your writing. You're very versatile. This one has a ...

Hey there! You clearly have a funny bone in you and I definitely picked up on it. I think this style of songwriting is definitely unique and you're trying to ...

I read this poem twice and I couldn't understand how the title linked to the poem itself. The rhyming scheme is simple but effective - and funny. You write with ...

I struggled to understand what this poem was about when I first read it. I saw it in the lit spotlight and assume that this was the original work that ...

I am guessing this is a parody of another work on this site under the same title. Personally I found the tone of this poem immature and it ruined the ...

This isn't a bad poem like you suggested in the write up. Thought has gone into the structure of the lines and the way the poem looks overall. It's a ...

Hello. This is a very intriguing work and I think you have a very different style from most other works I've seen on here. I know the original song you ...

Hello. I like what you've done here with the original Beauty and the Beast story. You have added more depth and made the characters more rounded. I think the opening ...

Hello. I can see that you have clearly thought a lot about the language and presentation of this particular poem. However, I am sorry to say I do not understand ...

Hello. You ask a lot of good questions in this poem. Such as: 'I am so deep in this hole and crying out to God above. They say I am ...

Hello! It took me a moment to realise that there were loads of chemical symbols in here, but then I am a little tired. I think what you've done is ...

Hello! This is a very sad and a very humorous poem. You have done well to capture these polarizing emotions. The overall tone of the poem is strong and the ...