Young Writers Society

Hello. This is a very intriguing work and I think you have a very different style from most other works I've seen on here. I know the original song you referenced for your idea so yeah... it really works. I think as a random song it gets full marks for originality. And as a Harry Potter fan I love how you've melded two awesome ideas together. This is really cool. Well done!

I'm not even sure what this really is, but I can honestly say that I was dying while reading it XD XD XD XD like what the heck even... I can't even... Like I don't know, nor can I explain, what the heck this is or is meant to be.

Like is it a song? You put it under lyrics so I'm assuming it is, but it's nothing like any song I've ever heard. If I'm honest, though, I'll admit that I DID put a tune to it while I was reading XP lol

I thought maybe there was some sort of inside joke about Harry Potter in it (because I've seen all the movies multiple times) but I couldn't detect one... Idk...

Just... idk what this is mostly.

But I like it.

I'm glad it's here

No offence, but WHAT IN THE WIDE WORLD IS THIS?! My brain is truly mushed.