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Greyhound26

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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Carry Me

    Hello, Greyhound here. I hope this review/message finds you well. I find your poetry quite enjoyable — a little dark. But poetry is supposed to be a way to relieve ...

    Feb 19
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: My Mind's Eye

    Hello there. I hope this message finds you well. I’m here for a review. I find your poetry quite enjoyable — a little dark. The thought processes that go through ...

    Feb 19
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: It’s always better together

    Grayhound here for my form of Controlled chaos review. I write these in Time as I'm reading them. Or using text. To voice. And reading along with it. The perspective ...

    Feb 9
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Norte Libre

    Hello, I’m reading this through an AI translator, and honestly it was bananas… really. Native English speaker here. Anywho, I do like the overall outline of the story you’ve got. ...

    Jan 31
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Insane

    Greyhound26 here to do a scattered-brain, ADHDer brain review! I write these reviews as I read the passage. I like to dictate my thought process — what it makes me ...

    Oct 9, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: A familiar face

    Back at it again. Because of my scatterbrained nature, I usually write my reviews at the same time I’m reading. ADHD is a bananas gear in my head, always shifting ...

    Sep 25, 2025
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Lyrical Re: C-L-O-W-N (All my friends play pretend)

    My first time giving a review in almost a year. And of course it’s got to be on clowns — how fitting, lol. Why not? I don’t even like clowns, ...

    Sep 25, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: What if I were a boy?

    It’s a breath of fresh air seeing this kind of dialogue. As a male, I’m looked at as a provider rather than a caretaker. My worth is measured by what ...

    Feb 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Ben gets a…a Valentine’s Day gift?!

    Greyhound here for another review. Before we get started, I’m really glad I found this one. This connects to the other part I reviewed earlier, and it ties together beautifully. ...

    Feb 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Angel and the Storm

    Greyhound. You have to review. I'm going to use the S’mores method that I’ve seen a lot of people use—it makes things more straightforward. Top Graham Cracker My initial thoughts: ...

    Feb 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: It’s not so lonely after all

    I was gonna start using the S’mores method, but I have to put this in the beginning because the disclaimer made me laugh. It feels like a glimpse into your ...

    Feb 11, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Scorpions, scorpions

    Greyhound 26 Because of my ADHD scatterbrained ways, I usually write my reviews as I’m reading the passage. So each of my paragraphs usually corresponds with one of the paragraphs ...

    Feb 4, 2025
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: The Village of the Konnes

    Greyhound 26 Because of my ADHD scatterbrained ways, I usually write my reviews as I’m reading the passage. So each of my paragraphs usually corresponds with one of the paragraphs ...

    Feb 4, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The death of Benjamin Cochran

    Greyhound 26 Here Because of my ADHD scatterbrained ways, I usually write my reviews as I’m reading the passage. So each of my paragraphs usually corresponds with one of the ...

    Feb 4, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Serena and Elise don’t like the ice cream man!

    Okay I writing these reviews as I read. I'll read a section and then I tell you my thoughts. It's weird I know PS I'm working for my phone so ...

    Feb 4, 2025


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