Gravity

I love this poem. However, there are just a few errors in rhythm and rhyme. "I said they're stupid and laughed at them. Not knowing that it might actually happen. ...

Your story leaves so many things unclear. Where is Zach going? Is Zach really the one leaving or is it Clara? Why don't I have more details and information. I ...

This was really well done. I love the flow of your poem. It actually does address a lot of valid points about the words "I love you". It made me ...

This is the only part of the autobiography that I have read. I thought it was... unique. Almost maddening in the sense that I want more info, but extremely unique. ...

I liked this story. I wish there would have been more description as to why the boy and the girl are outside in the snow. I also wanted to know ...

There are several grammatical errors. The thing I really didn't like about the story is that in the beginning, there is not a lot of description with setting. Second, "newspaper ...

I love this guide. I'm a freshman in high school; so this was extremely helpful. The only thing I want to say is your use of "I". In a piece ...

I agree with @Monsters, with all of his critiques. I'm not sure how long you've been writing poetry, but your use of the word "Cause" is informal and infuriating. Maybe ...

I loved this story. At first, I thought it was just going to be about a bunch of sexist pigs fighting over some princess. Then, when I learned that Gerard ...

Everyone is saying "more description". I definitely agree, but I won't hound you about it. The thing that I got confused about was the chronological order of your story. I ...

I loved the vocabulary that you used, it just made the imagery seem so more real. I loved the rhyming. I like how you rhymed creatively, and used your vocab ...

I haven't read anything written by you. I have now. I have to say it was an absolute beautiful poem. I really don't normally like poetry, I've been trying to ...

I'm going to cry. Yes, it was creepy. Very creepy and it disturbed me slightly. I like that. It's always good to know that somebody else has more disturbing ideas ...

I hope you don't take this the wrong way. I thought the poem was actually kinda funny. I interpreted it in two different ways. 1. I thought it was almost ...

Same as HomeschooledTeen, with something this personal, I am hesitant to review it. However, I owe it to you as a fellow author. So I'll try not to be a ...