GingerLizzy

I loved this actually, it made me think about my relationship with my own big sister; how they always do something which your mother tells you is wrong, but when ...

Whoa. Loved this if I'm honest, it's so simple but yet so complex with perhaps a number of reasons depending on the reader. I liked the shortness if I'm honest ...

I agree.. It's pretty short. I need more. More imagery and more information about the causes and stuff. Other than that, I can really quote on anything else as it ...

Not bad for a first post - mine was undoubtedly worse than this. I liked the concept but think you should work on structure and punctuation; I've just pointed out ...

Wow, I liked this, but at first I was gonna complain 'cause I thought it was going to be one of those EMOtional and depressing poems that make me think ...

Hmm.. I liked this actually. I loved the portrayal of the little girl - how she clambers up onto her mothers lap and literally climbs all over her when she's ...

Ooh.. Yummy. I loved this, it was so different and refreshing. It's not often when I read stories of a married couple, they all tend to be of blooming relationships ...

I love this whole series and I'm wating to read the fourth at the minute, but I have to say that as his books progress, he seems to lose control ...

Well, your use of imagery was lovely in this, although in some places I think you over-did it slightly - I'm not so sure. The imagery that you did use ...

Hmm.. You had some great depth to this poem and it had a lot of emotion in it, which was super and well constructed. I thought it flowed nicely, and ...

I liked the poem, but the use of referring to monsters in poems is used a lot and I've read so many, that it gets boring. Maybe you could add ...

Hmm.. I liked this to be honest. It was.. I'm not sure of the word... Dainty? Quiaty? I haven't a clue what word it is - I am a goose ...

Indifferent springs to mind when it comes to my feelings about this. I'm not all to with the French scene, I must admit and it made me confused - what ...

I agree with Matt on the originality scale - let's just say, I've seen this, I've read that and I've got the eye strain to prove it. If you're going ...

I liked this, it flowed well and had some great imagery that really helped me feel the emotion and meaning behind this piece. I agree that you should scrap on ...