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Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 4.1
Hello :) I only read the first part of this, and this one, but even though I don't know what happens in between, I though I would review this one ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: goodbye
Hello :) So there obviously isn't much for me to review lol but I thought I would make an effort anyway by letting you know that I loved this. It ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: 495 dollars
Hi there :) along with the other reviewers I felt undeniably happy while, and after reading this short story. It is relatable and warm, and while it does not give ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Alone (Part 1)
Hi there! I would first like to say that I know you aren't finished with this, but I like where it is heading so far, as many popular books, especially ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Coming Home To You
Hello :) I would like to start by letting you know that was a beautifully written piece and I enjoyed looking through it very much. I feel like it is ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Unnatural Enemies: Part 1
Hello :) So, I liked this piece a lot, and I saw that myjaspercat already wrote a review sort of detailing any grammatical errors, but I figured it wouldn't hurt ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: GAPWIDE! The Human Swallower of the Ugly Forest (Part One!)
Hi there :) I liked this poem, I think that it fit right into its category; humorous. With that, I have a few tiny errors that can simply be fixed ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: untitled document
Wow :) this was great! I feel like I have nothing to review because I truly found nothing wrong with this. I think it was something interesting and relate able, ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: exodus
Hi there :) I would like to begin this review by saying that this is a very creative idea and did require a lot of research (like you commented on ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: "Lion"
Wow, first of all. I came hear to write a review but I didn't really find anything wrong with this or something that needed correcting, so good job! It was ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Selina Heroza and the Rise of the Fallen
Hi there :) So, for my review I would firstly like to say that I enjoyed this and also that much of what I would have to say was already ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: i can forgive.
Hello :) To start off, I would like to commemorate you for writing such a great poem, it definitely caught my attention, which poems typically don't so good job. Overall, ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Impersonation
Hi :) To start off, I would just like to say that your opening paragraph was incredibly enticing, and truly captured my attention, so good job with that "Hello, good ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Serendipity
WOW. Is all that I have to say after reading this. It was very well done and the ending made me shiver, it was very well written. I like the ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: CID ~ Case1 : The Mystery of killer Pen
Hi Eros! First off, I would like to say that your background was very good--it gave simple descriptions of your character, but left enough wiggle room for the reader to ...
Jul 11, 2017
