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XD I love this!

This was so good! I don't think I can help you out by writing a review because I can't find anything to give some constructive criticism on and because I'm not very skilled when it comes to reviewing poetry, but I just wanted you to know that I thought it was an amazing poem. I love how positive and powerful it was! It definitely deserves to be in the literary spotlight!

This really spoke to me, as it's as real as any writer can experience in these kinds of moments. I can 100% relate to this kind of emotion, then again I won't say the words "I know how that feels." It's unfair of someone to say something like that, since we all live different lives.

I'm sorry you're in this time right now-- I was for a while. Don't push yourself to try and get your motivation back; if it's forced it may make you feel worse. That being said don't allow yourself to fall away from writing. If you're this frustrated, you must love writing, as everyone else does who is on this website.

If I may suggest a couple of things to get you back some inspiration: Sometimes I google "plot generators" or "most beautiful words". I pick one, and literally whatever comes to my head. All of my words my mind is thinking. It doesn't have to make sense on paper or visually, but it'll make sense to you. Look at some pictures of your favorite things or something that catches your eye.

You may have already tried these things, but I hope it gives you a peace of mind. Hang in there, honeymoon. Love your name btw ^^

Hello, honeymoon! Gxldencrxwns here for a review.

Right off the bat, I noticed one thing: the way this poem was formatted. There's nothing wrong with it, I personally like this way much better. I just wanted to point it out, lol.

I also noticed that at the beginning of each new line, the first letter is lowercase. I find nothing wrong with writing like that, I just don't really see it much and it caught my attention rather quickly.

You can really hear the emotions expressed through the words, with the hyphens and the write erase repeated twice, and entered and spaced to make it look like it's the beginning of a new stanza. That was an amazing touch to the poem, good job!

I don't really have much to say anymore. I saw no spelling, grammar, or punctuation mistakes, which is something I don't see in every poem or writing I read. This is a solid poem, and I wouldn't change one thing about it!

Keep writing!
~gxldencrxwns

amazing I love it lol, although I can not find anything to review lol, again good job

Wow this was great! I feel like I have nothing to review because I truly found nothing wrong with this. I think it was something interesting and relate able, and the format gave it a sort of whimsical feel. Writers block is something that everyone experiences but not enough people talk about but I am glad that you did!

After this I plan on reading more of your works and following you because I was pleasantly surprised, which I did not think I would be after reading the title