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Re: The Complication
Hi Adam. I'm here to review! So I'm guessing this poem is about how absurd the system is; how no matter what we do, we seem to have no real ...
Sep 17, 2014 -
Re: Do You Ever
Hi PeaceLuvPoems. I love your username! I'm Solvy and I'm here to review for you. I think this is a neat poem, but I also think there's room for improvement. ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: The Epidemic: Chapter 2
Hi Legend! I like your piece here, but I think there's something missing. This is written in first person and in the present, like The Hunger Games. I like that; ...
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: The Kingly Mammal
Hi Linkzude. :) Look how God has crowned him With scorching orange flame. I believe this is a lion. :) I love your writing style, it is so simple and ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
Re: Forget Their Scripts.
Oh, the irony. Somehow, while I was reading, I thought your poem would end with a quote that supports your statement, for it would make it "legitimate", according to the ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: This is the School of Chaos
Hi there, unknown. I don't know how I ended up here... I'm supposed to be writing a paper. But either way, I'm going to be reviewing for you. I ended ...
Aug 30, 2014 -
Re: .
Hi R0nnie. I'm Solvy and I'm here to review for you. I enjoyed the tone of this poem; I felt that despite the topic, it also sounds very calmed and ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Soarin' With One Direction
Hi ccwritingrainbow! Nice to meet you! My name is Solvy and I will be reviewing for you today. I will start off saying that I don't know much about One ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The loss of a Mother.
Hi Elinor! Nice to meet you~ I'm Solvy and I'm here to review for you. :) I don't want to be repetitive, but I agree with @Sunshine when she mentions ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Going through Time-Chapter Four: I Meet the Most Vicious Chihuahua on Earth
Hi wisegirl22. My name is Solvy and I am here to review your piece. Have you ever heard that quote that says something like, "Live every day as if it's ...
Jul 22, 2014 -
Re: Body image
Hi Booshian! Welcome to YWS! I am glad to see you've already posted a piece. I just ready your poem and I will be reviewing for you today. I really ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: But I still like you.
Hi Roxie. I think you have the potential to write a magnificent poem. I say this because I think you can find a way to make your poem sound a ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: what goes in her head
Hi thenonconformist. Welcome to YWS! To become a great writer, a person needs to be creative and observant (the rest comes with experience). While reading your piece, I realized you ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Live Like we're Dying.
Hi stephndek. I like your message here. But I think you can work on the imagery more; give the reader something to imagine by, perhaps, adding more descriptions to the ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: The voice
Hi Moniker, Welcome to the site! I like this poem of yours because its flow makes it sound somewhat lyrical, and that makes it catchy. And on top of that, ...
Jun 15, 2014