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Re: falling for emotions
Hi there, niccoletta! I am GeeLyria, and I am going to be reviewing for you today. First off, I want to welcome you to the site! If you like reading, ...
Jan 18, 2013 -
Re: Like A Broken Glass
Hi there, sak965! I just need to review this. x) Okay. My first impression of this was pretty good; the title is catchy, the length of the lines are uniform, ...
Jan 18, 2013 -
Re: breathing easy
Hi, Persy. Can't say I enjoyed this because it is undeniably beautiful
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: About me
Hi, keepitogether! (I love your nickname) I am GeeLyria, and it's a pleasure to meet you. ^_^ Well, first off, I want to welcome you to YWS. And to tell ...
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: How do you cry pretty tears?
Hi, TheEaseDropper. I'm GeeLyria, and I will be reviewing your piece right now. - This poem is good. I cannot deny you have the potential to write something fantastic. However, ...
Jan 15, 2013 -
Re: Cinder (A Cinderella Story)
Hi, IngridClayre. I am GeeLyria, and I'm going to review your short story. I noticed Elinor pretty much covered it all. This is not bad at all (much better than ...
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: Cinderella
Hi, there Deanie! Oh, Gosh! I can't express how much I enjoyed this! xD I truly did!
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Chelsea
Hi, Marcia! I am here to review your story, as I promised yesterday. Like I've already mentioned, your writing style is catchy. I love the fact that your punctuation is ...
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Deleted
Hi there, magpie94! It's so great to see you have posted on the poetry section! I think what you have written is really sweet. The title is attractive, the wording ...
Jan 12, 2013 -
Re: Insensitivity
Hi, lovely Bee! ^_^ I am pretty sure I will review this for you! Okay. The thing I liked the most of this poem was the honesty; you come out ...
Jan 11, 2013 -
Re: What did we mean?
Hi there, aouther2b! Being totally honest here, this is one of the best poems I've read on this site. It made me feel so welcome as a reader; it even ...
Jan 11, 2013 -
Re: Control
Hi, Maddymayhem, my dear friend. ^_^ Oooh. This one sounds a bit dark. Sounds like a cutting-addiction to me. ;| However, this piece is thought-provocative, because you mention "you control ...
Jan 11, 2013 -
Re: Of Lace and Silk
Hi there, stelagineva. I am GeeLyria, and today I'm going to be reviewing for you. :] First off, I want to let you know that your imagery is fantastic, and ...
Jan 10, 2013 -
Re: We rot, and rot, and rot- until we're rotten-
Hi there, Demoness! Wow. This piece is pessimistic! xD To tell you the truth, I finished reading it because I love you. However, I know there are readers out there ...
Jan 10, 2013 -
Re: "I love you"
Hi there, aouther2b. I am GeeLyria, and I'm here to review for you. So I like the simplicity of your poem, mostly because the wording was decent and the rhyming ...
Jan 10, 2013
