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Hey Chrissy, xJupiter here. I haven't gotten to review any of your work yet, until I came upon this! So here we are: First thing I noticed in this poem ...

Heyo. First thing I noticed in this poem was the layout of it. Now I know this may seem like a personal preference, but it really matters. Try and separate ...

I'm listening to too much Skrillex. HELP. I CAN'T ESCAPE. Anyway, xJ here for a review! The first stanza is fine, but I believe all the stanzas should be the ...

Hey meganmcfarlane1, xJ here for a review type... thing! I'm gonna start off with the first thing I noticed, I haven't even got to the actual poem yet. So what's ...

Heyo, MialyNire. I think this poem should have a different title. It says "Your Weapon," but this poem is about hope. I understand how hope could possibly be seen as ...

Hello! xJ here for a review. Fridays, eh? Well, the title seems self-explanatory. But first of all, I was a bit confused at the line: "if anyone would really care ...

Heyo! xJ here for a review. Although I may be a stupid little 14 year old compared to you, I do not have a lack of knowledge, so I shall ...

Hey there, ChocolateCello. xJ here to check out some more of your work! First stanza; "Writing my words neat and clean" would sound a bit better without the "my." And ...

Hello! Or shall I say, Meow? I like the poem, it's cute! It mostly appeals to me because I am a serious cat person... I LOVE CATS. Firstly, you always ...

Heyo. I like chickens. But anyway! xJ here for a review. I really did like the poem until about the half-way mark of it. This poem is great! But it's ...

Heyo! xJ here for a review. First of all, nice intro to the story, it went smoothly. The only thing I would suggest is that instead of separating the first ...

Hello ChocolateCello! Firstly, I thought this poem was touching and adorable, even though I'm not much for cars. But it was sweet, as if the car was a best friend ...

This is hilarious and adorable and AHHHHHHH... but I was definitely confused at first, and a little angry. But anyway! You kept up well with the horrible... just... horrible... grammar, ...

Hello! Seeing as this is your first of published work, you are going to need some critiquing! So let's get started. Firstly, welcome to YWS! And it seems you've made ...

Yo bruddah. I feel the need to review a mod's work. So here I am. Wheeeeee! Let's take this stanza by stanza. 1. Start out the poem with a capital ...