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Re: Whats wrong?
Hey there, 1234 is here with a very short review perhaps an extremely short one. Okay, let's jump to the review straightforward. The repitition played a great role in your ...
Feb 14, 2021 -
Re: lovelines
Hey there, 1234 here to provide you with a very short perhaps a precise review. Ok so let's jump to the review. like river water vapor in a February freeze, ...
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Re: Ch 1 - Out of Sight and Out of Mind
1234 is here to provide you with a very short(precise) review. So, let's start. I liked the story so much. I have a mere confusion that why the last man, ...
Feb 14, 2021 -
Re: True Love
this was a great one. That you are more than words can surmise i think surmise is not the proper word here. you could have used any other word such ...
Feb 13, 2021 -
Re: Never again
no. i couldn't resist myself from reviewing it. although I am not having that time, but I will try to provide you with an honest review. well, i was quite ...
Feb 13, 2021 -
Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter-1.1
ok. first come to the mistakes- Yeah every season, now don’t disturb me. Let me finish the tale of the Sky of Seasons.” said Opa, the grandpa of Ethan and ...
Feb 13, 2021 -
Re: Chapter Two: Air of Mystery (Olivia's POV)
let's first figure out the mistakes- four friends and his two parents. i think omitting the word two will be helpful. only parents sound better. i can't find any grammatical ...
Feb 12, 2021 -
Re: The Other Side: Chapter 4: Missy (Excerpt)
As usual, you have nailed it. time for a few mistakes, Sorry, I’ve just been really losing track of dates recently. really seems redundant here. consider removing it. “Do you ...
Feb 12, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 4
ok. so let me find some mistakes of yours- "I don't believe you. You don't really have a pet squirrel, do you?" really seems unnecessary here. "It's okay. I forgive ...
Feb 12, 2021 -
Re: Surviving the zombie apocalypse as a highschooler Day #2
first of all, it's actually a very good piece. now, let's come to the small mistakes- "He's pissed Elle!" put a comma before Elle. 'i dont want kids' it should ...
Feb 11, 2021 -
Re: The Other Side: Chapter 3: Harvey
ok. so time for some tiny mistakes- Just savour what it's like to be in love…. you get me? i think you should put a 'do' before you. it sounds ...
Feb 11, 2021 -
Re: The woman with no name
awesome. I have a few confusions. let's come to those. Body left there to rot All was left Was Her innocent Plot . what do you want to mean by ...
Feb 11, 2021 -
Re: Claire and Dianne
ok. as you asked for the grammatical errors, let's come to it first. there are a few errors I could point out- Cursing uncontrollably,from all the pain there will be ...
Feb 11, 2021 -
Re: The Other Side: Chapter 2: Missy
at first, let's figure out some mistakes- There’s no point trying to be normal is there. this line is not clear. please make it clear. The multi Grammy winning manager, ...
Feb 11, 2021 -
Re: The Bubble
this article or essay, whatever you say, is awesome. the concept of a bubble is so good. there are a few mistakes I would like to draw your attention to- ...
Feb 11, 2021
