this article or essay, whatever you say, is awesome. the concept of a bubble is so good. there are a few mistakes I would like to draw your attention to-
I want to leave the bubble but no matter how hard I try I cant break the bubble.
it will be can't not cant
What am I suppose to do.
there will be a question mark after do
I feel as though I'm ready to burst the bubble I just don't know how too.
it will be to, not too.
I have to point out my achievements to feel achnoledged, even if it is annoying to everyone else.
i think it should be acknowledged not achnoledged
Iv'e never felt like this
it should be I'veThat my parents wont find my posts.
won't not wontsometimes it gets so hard that I want to just crawl in a corner and never leave.
bubbles are in the form of a sphere. they are not likely to have corners.
whatever, overall, it's really good.
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