ForeverYoung299

Hello. Here for a review!! The review will be too short. This was honestly a flawless one. I couldn't even find a single mistake which is too rare. It describes ...

I was heart-broken after reading this. But, why haven't you given a title? Why is it untitled? I think you should provide an appropriate title. ‘Untitled’ is not the suitable ...

Hello again!!! Almost darkest Remove this part. This part, at least to me, is useless. So, you should consider removing this part. A small window, which could not open and ...

Hello. Here for a review. Now is it to late Or should I still try Cause you’re leaving Saturday So I’m not gonna lie Maybe, for the first line,you could ...

Hello. ForeverYoung299 here for a review. The picture was awesome. The feet of his teammates and his opponents pound on the court as loud as volatile cannonballs. The beginning was ...

Hello. Here for a review. Before reading: The title made me to come here and check it out. After reading : In one word, this was awesome. Grows Yet still ...

It's good but I think it's not the best. Please don't think I am discouraging you. I am just telling the facts. For a scholarship competition, you need to make ...

Hello. Here for a review. I loved it. Although at the present moment, I am a mere school student but I really liked your ideas about College life. I really ...

Hello. ForeverYoung here for a review. First one first I really liked the rhythm scheme of the first poem. Inside and out With reason and doubt The use of opposites ...

Hello. ForeverYoung for a review. You two did a great job collabing with each other I loved this one. This is too beautiful. I don't have many things to suggest, ...

Hello. ForeverYoung here for a review. First of all, welcome to YWS. If you have any problem, please pm me. I would be happy to help. First impression This was ...

Hello. ForeverYoung here for a review. This was an awesome one. Grows: Straight as steel I don't think steel is the perfect word here. Maybe, you can replace it with ...

Hello. Here for a review. Glows It was too god. Not flawless, but it was amazing. I was hooked throughout the story. It speaks of losses and what follows. Both ...

hey. Foreveryoung99 with a review. Each time, this happened. Each time, he awoke painful and sore. But each time, he went back for more. too much each time. Even if ...

Hello. Here for a review. The beginning was really nice. It shows about your life and it's actually a problem many faces- what to wear? Ginse should be jeans. Huh! ...