You hurt me inside
But you fill up my life
I’ve been thinking someday
That I’d make you my wife
Now is it to late
Or should I still try
Cause you’re leaving Saturday
So I’m not gonna lie
.
There’s things I should’ve told you since the day that we met
Every night I pray to heaven that together we’ll get
And I need you more than ever cause I’m stuck in my head
If not as a lover than at least as a friend
.
I need you
Woah
I need you
So don’t leave me
Cause I need you
I need you
Woah
I need you
So don’t leave me
Cause I need you
I need you
.
I'm always copy pasting words when I write a new song
It’s the stuff I meant to say to you but now you are gone
I miss the stuff we used to do and feelings you brought
But mostly just how much I loved you, with all of my heart
Ohh
.
I need you
Woah
I need you
So don’t leave me
Cause I need you
I need you
Woah
I need you
So don’t leave me
Cause I need you
I need you
.
Did you know your friend is jealous and he’s saying you lied
That that look you always gave me, it was just a disguise
That you were hiding how you hate me and that every single smile
Was just out of pity but I saw light in your eyes
.
Tell me the truth
Cause not knowing is worse
I can’t move on
Until I know for sure
I wanna get going
But I’m stuck in reverse
And I’m running outta gas
In this one person hearse
.
I need you
Woah
I need you
So don’t leave me
Cause I need you
I need you
I need you
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Wow, this is amazing song! I can almost hear the person calling out to their lover. I tend to visualize when I read a work, and these lyrics painted a definitive picture in my head. I followed the story in my head, and made up small details for myself.
Your writing shows the path of the heartbroken singer, longing for a past love. I thruroughly enjoyed this.
I do not have any criticisms, actually! To me, this is a solid song!
Hello. Here for a review.
Maybe, for the first line,you could write
Now it is too late
I think it seems better and for the second line, put a question mark.
There are things.
Put a question mark after lied.
Although repeating is good but repeating it three times doesn't seem to fit.
Overall, it was a smooth poem. Loved it. Keep writing
Thanks!