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Re: 4
This is a very well written essay, and I appreciate that you cite and actually backed up your argument. I know that not all Christians believe as I believe, but ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: The Lethal Dance
This is a very dark poem, but I liked it, a lot. Your rhyming was incredible, and it really flowed. Nice meter and nice rhythm. I like how you put ...
Jul 16, 2012 -
Re: Maybe Tomorrow
Hey there!(: I'm going to review your poem today. I really really like this. Its written in a very flowing way and honestly, I felt like I was reading a ...
Jul 14, 2012 -
Re: Thine Eyes Do Flit
Well I had to use Shakespearean language for class.
Jul 11, 2012 -
Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)
You absolutely must write this! Its so true I feel like. I mean, sometimes my friends look at my differently when I bring things up about writing. This is amazing! ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Story Snippet #2
Hey! I'll review this As Wicked said above, its just a snippet, but its purely dialogue and does not give us any sense of the story. I really would like ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: My First Ever Poem (from when I was seven!)
You were seven?! Wow!!! This is really good for a seven year old! Its really cute!
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: ..
This is simply amazing. We read so many depressing poems, but this just put a smile on my face! It is very uplifting and amazing! I love it!!!
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: A Romantic Mistake
Okay, so I am like, no good giving tips on poetry, but I have to say, that this is full of emotion. Your comparisons are good, and you really give ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Coffee Break (a Poker Face by Lady Gaga parody)
Hobbit gangsta! You've done it again!!!! How do you make up such amazing parodies?!! Seriously, you should sing them and put them on youtube, litterally.
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: The day YWS stood still.
ROCKY!!! THIS WAS AWESOME! I was in a bad mood cause my neices were like asking me what to do when I didn't know, so I was losing my temper ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
OMG!!! I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD AT THIS!!! I LOVE IT!!! I WAS SINGING ALONG TO IT!! Hey, could I take it to school and show my fellow pirates and ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: My Heart
Hello jemjive! I'll be your reviewer for today! This was really good. It really made me think about a guy I really really like. Its true, and it was an ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
THIS WAS CUTE!!! I so wish it would happen to me...well not exactly, the ending :D not the whole heart break thing. It was super cute, I loved it.
Mar 26, 2010 -
Re: What Happened?
Wow. This was really good. I loved this, it came from somewhere deep, and I can totally relate to losing friends....aside from a few little capitilizations this was awesome. I ...
Mar 24, 2010