This poem lead me to write many other poems. This poem is so special to me, I have it memorised in my head!
Lonely
If you're feeling lonely and you don't have any friends,
It doesn't matter, it's not the end.
Just play with me, you'll be alright,
Not sad, just happy and bright.
So if you're feeling lonely you know what to do,
You can still play even if you're seventy-two!
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Hi, ArcticMonkey ^-^ (Nice username btw lol)
Firstly, this made me laugh xD Sooooooo adorable! This is excellent for a seven-year-old, much better than I ever could have done at that age haha
Again, sooooooooo precious c:
Catnip~
That is so flippin' cute!
This is sooo cute!
It's really adorable, it's wonderful that you had been devoted and such a talented writer at 7. Please Continue Writing!!!
its really cute and even from when you were seven you can tell you had great potential! now i wanna read your new stuff! keep writing
I am not going to criticize a seven year old's work unless it was super dreadful,
and this for the record was quite exceptional for a seven year old.
Love it! Its so cute, and flows very well for a seven year old.If you can write that when you were seven i wonder what you can write now?!
This is pretty adorable, especially the last line. My favorite line is the second, when you're saying it's not the end. It's Great for being written by a seven year old.
Hey there!
So you were seven when you wrote this?
Awesome!
I wrote poetry when I was seven too, but I wasn't this good.
Actually, I don't even think I do good in poetry, that's why I don't write it . HAHA.
Nice job!
-KAT <3
Thanks you guys, I didn't know that it was going to be this popular! Too be honest I was a lot better then at poetry than I am now so...
That is so amazing for a seven year old. :] If that's how you wrote then, I definitely need to check out what you're writing now!
You were seven?! Wow!!! This is really good for a seven year old! Its really cute!
Nice !
wow you wrote this when you were seven?!?! really nice job!!!
Oh, you should have! Especially if it was against other people your age!
Thanks, I corrected it. I wrote this for a poetry competition but didn't have the guts to submit it.
For a seven-year-old's work, this is phenomenal! There is just one mistake, which I am sure is a typo; in the first line, you wrote "lonel" instead of "lonely." Did you revise this recently? If so, I'd like to see what the original looked like; it's hilarious to see how little kids write. Anyway, this is very cute. Nice work!