FluttershyFan

This is a great poem. I love the metaphors you use to describe things. One of my favorite lines is "that float up the cracked dirty highway, to the gates ...

Wow. I am blown away. When I read your description I was thinking to myself: "How can someone write whole poem about bricks. This will probably suck." Well, you have ...

This is very clever idea. I like how you tied everything into the main subjet of puns even though the examples were just examples. One question of something I didn't ...

This is very powerful in a way that it's hard to put my finger on. I love your description on everything and how you mention all of the different awful ...

I love how, when you wrote this poem, you have a nice tone. It's not really telling a story but more so, just saying. It's very blunt and to the ...

I find this story interesting. You clearly have a wide knowledge of boats and this almost reminds me of Moby Dick. But I think that Moby Dick was one of ...

This is very interesting! I liked how you were informing in an entertaining way. This isn't much of a "story" but more of a documentary or something like that. There ...

I really like how you described this situation. It would be really scary and this creates a very nice image of what is going on. One thing you might want ...

Hey there! I'm here for another short review. There was one thing I thought could use some editing. So I get that she wanted to find Kimberly and is the ...

This is a very deep poem I like your repetition "Silence this is what I crave, this is what i need." Though there is a grammar error though. In "This ...

Here we are again. I love this story! One thing though. When "I" pulls the trigger, it seems like an overreaction. I mean, I see where you're coming from. Someone ...

THis is a great story and I read the first one so I get what's going on. I must say though, there is a Kimerly issue here and there. First, ...

This is beautiful. I love how you said the thing about describing the stranger through a mirror. This hardly seems like a story in comparison to a heartfelt talk from ...

This is incredible. I love the rome you use in your writing. It's one of those thing that you can't describe what you like about it. Kinda like how if ...

This was a very heartfelt poem. I can tell you put a lot of time and care into it. My only criticism is that it is very unclear what your ...