FlamingPhoenix

Okay, I look forward to the next chapter. :D

Great I will have a look when it is done and see how much better it is. :D

Okay if that is why you wanted the thepics their for then you keep them there.

Okay you do what you need to do.

Okay I just had a look at what you fixt and it is so much better. well done. :d

Okay.:D

You are welcome and I will review your other chapter when I get the chains :D see you soon bye.

Great review by the way.

I would love to read them and what you said about my review was not harsh at all. I gees you can shorten your words if you want to in ...

I am so glad you liked it and I was not rude. :D Let me no when you have posted more of your work. Oh and thank you for the ...

You are welcome and I am happy to help. :D

Oh and thank you for following me. Oh and I all most for got to tell you welcome to YWS I hope you like it her and good like with ...

Great I am glad you agree with what I said. But don't get me wrong I loved your chapter and I am really looking for word to the next chapter. ...

Chapter five has been posted all ready, and just to let you no I am going back on chapters and fixing them. Chapter 1 and 2 are all most done. ...

No I am not from the UK sorry. And okay if you think it is too late to separate the prologue from chapter 1 that is okay with me. :D ...