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Conquest of Shadows ~ The Flames With In

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: Ruins Of Fire

    Hi Shikora here to do a review. What I liked I really liked this story it was very interesting. And the name you chose was a really good idea, it ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 11.2]

    Hi Shikora here with a review. After a lot of reading though your past chapters I can come to this one and review. So let's start. What I like I ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 21 (LMS IV)

    Hi Shikora here with a review like I promised. What I like I really like this chapter, it was really good. If you ask me I think you've gotten a ...

    Dec 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Dreams We Wander

    Hi Shikora here with a review. I really liked this poem. It was a really neat idea. It wasn't to hard to under stand, and it wasn't to long ether. ...

    Dec 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Imagination

    Hi Shikora here. I really liked reading this poem. It was really well written. The words mixed together really well, making it an easy read. This poem felt so true ...

    Nov 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Fuel

    Wow this was a really good poem. I really like the name to it. It was really interesting, when i first saw the name I was really interested to no ...

    Nov 10, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Seasons of my life

    Hi Shikora here with a review. This was just a lovely peace of work. I really, really liked reading it. The name to this poem was just a right choice ...

    Nov 8, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Humor Re: When time glitches

    Hi Shikora here with a review. I really, really liked reading this story. It was very interesting. I like how you show all the frustration Leah has with this time ...

    Nov 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Late One Night

    Hi Shikora here with a review. I really liked reading this story. I liked the beginning it gets it hooked right away. I also liked the title to this story. ...

    Nov 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: M.A.D.I.S.O.N

    Hi Shikora here to leave a review. I really do think this poem will make your friend feel a lot better. It's nice to no that you think about her ...

    Nov 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Sorry

    Hi Shikora here with a review. I really liked this poem. It felt so sad and emotional. I could feel how sad it was. I really like the name to ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: good day / bad day

    Hi Shikora here. I don't really have anything bad to say about this I felt like giving you a nice review because I think you did really well with the ...

    Nov 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The suns hot burst

    Hi Eagle, Shikora were with a review. Now this is a really nice poem. I really liked the name, I think it suites the poem very well. I'm not really ...

    Nov 4, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter one: Sarah and the pink bunny Twiki

    Hi Shikora here with a review. This was a really great start to the story. I'm glad i came a read it. The name was the thing at drew me ...

    Nov 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Out on The River

    Hi Shikora here with a review. Wow this story was really well written. I just felt like I was with Juliet as she was there near the river. Your description ...

    Nov 3, 2018


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