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Conquest of Shadows ~ The Flames With In

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hello

    Hi, your friend Shikora here with a review for you. Okay let's get to it. I really liked reading this poem, it was really interesting to read, because it's really ...

    Jan 15, 2019
  • Script » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Thief That Stole Excalibur (Part 2)

    Hi, Shikora here with a review. Let's get to it. So out of the chapter I only saw one thing that needs to be fixed. Maybe we could be friends ...

    Jan 14, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Luminous: Cicadas (Chap 1)

    Hi, Shikora here with a review. Let's get to it. So I couldn't find anything wrong with this story if I'm going to be honest with you. So I'm just ...

    Jan 14, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: What do you See?

    Hi, Shikora is back to review one of your works today. Let's get to it. So I saw one thing in the poem that seemed a little strange. It was ...

    Jan 14, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Masks

    Hello, Shikora here with a review. Let's get right to it. I really like the way you start this poem out, It was really interesting, The lines all flowed together ...

    Jan 13, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Lion Tamer

    Hi, Shikora here with a review. So lets get right to it. This is a really interesting story you have here, It has a really cool plot, and it would ...

    Jan 13, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: feathers on the water

    Hi, Shikora here with a review. So let's jump right into it. I really like your poem it has a great flow to it, and it was really easy to ...

    Jan 13, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Sarah and the pink bunny Twiki: Chapter four

    Hi, Shikora here with a review. You know how much I love reading your story so I'm going to jump right into the review. After a while had they come ...

    Jan 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Glistening Home

    Hello Oxara, Shikora here with a review for you. So lets get right to it. I really like the name you have picked for this poem, I think it's really ...

    Jan 12, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Letter to My Ex

    Hi Shikora here to give you a review. So I didn't see anything wrong with this little story. But I can say I really liked reading it. It was packed ...

    Jan 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Human

    Hi, Shikora here with a review. Let's get to it. So this is a really good poem. I saw the name and I thought it sounded really interesting, so I ...

    Jan 11, 2019
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Escape

    Hi, Shikora here with a review. Let's get to it. I really like this song you have come up with. It's really nice, the works are full of so much ...

    Jan 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Sarah and the pink bunny Twiki: Chapter 3

    Hello Shikora here with a review. Let's get right to it. It's been a really long time since I've seen you post any of your work, so when I saw ...

    Jan 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: So-called merciless

    Hi, Shikora here with a review. To be honest I found this poem really interesting, I'm not really sure what it is about, but it was still fun to read ...

    Jan 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Brighter Days

    Hello, Shikora here with a review. Let's get to it, shall we. I really like this poem, I can see so much emotion went into it, and that just made ...

    Jan 10, 2019


I like to create sympathy for my characters, then set the monsters loose.
— Stephen King