Firelight

This story is fantastic. It is so detailed and has so much emotion. I like how in the beginning you start with a quote and end with one to make ...

This story was great! I didn't see any errors at all, and it was a very developed story. I defiantly didn't expect that ending, and it made the story wrap ...

I really this story! It was a really great start to a new book, and I especially like the ending. It was mysterious, and i always love mysterys! I li,Ed ...

Fire here! I must say, this was an amazingly written piece! The beginning was very mysterious, and you showed the element of suspense really well. This had me hooked from ...

Fire here for a review! You make my job really easy cuz' there's nothing to fix in this story! :) I love it! The style of writing is almost poetic ...

This poem is really well written. I like the whole idea, and the fact that you can relate to it. The topic is defiantly one some people can relate too. ...

Oh, wow. This story almost made me cry! It was really good. The emotion in it is really pronounced and it has a sad feeling about it. You defiantly get ...

Wow this was great! It drew me right in from the start! It was vauge, so there's lots to wonder and develop later. It had an air of mystery about ...

Hey :) I liked this story a lot! I loved the scientific side of the argument (for I am obsessed with science). Also, I liked the teasing relationship in the ...

This is a great start for a novel! The characters are already well-developed, and the plot keeps you reading. I know you dont really want it to sound like a ...

Yes!!! You wrote more!!! *claps* I am soo glad that you extended the story! I love how it still has that myterious air about it, and keeps you interested by ...

I really like this. It is short, but to the point. Even in those few words, you really get what you mean. It is also different. I don't know many ...

I really like this poem. It's great because it is relatable to a lot of people and I clearly expresses your feelings. I noticed that you don't have each stanza ...

This poem is great and really relatable! I remember my dreams normally and it kind of bothers me when I can't remember them. There is one part that felt kind ...

This story is really great. Your title really got me interested. The word choice was great and the idea was awesome. Your story idea is so creative. It's really hard ...