FireSpyGirl

I love this!

Hi there! This is a really good story! I love the detail, the feeling. It isn't over-detailed, but it isn't under-detailed either. That is awesome! The ending is really good ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! So this is a really cute poem! It is simple without being too simple, and it says everything in a few ...

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I totally understand that feeling.

:) I really, really love this poem.

Hi there! LOVE this poem! It is very relatable and it speaks right to the heart of the reader. I only noticed one typo, and that is on this line: ...

Awesome poem!

Hi there! This is a really, really good poem! I love it! One line needs a little work, and that is this one: "Got loosen by a fuss" I would ...

This is very interesting!

Thank you! I thought that part might need some work, so I will get on that.

This is really good! I don't have much to say at all, as this is really good. "A web of cracks spread through a mirror I once looked through" This ...

I LOVE THIS!

It's me again! I honestly have nothing to offer. This is a good chapter, well written, and I'm looking forward to more! I can't wait to find out what Clandestine ...

I love it!