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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Unstoppable Force and the Immovable Object

    I was actually in the middle of reading this and then I had to go. That's why I followed you, so that I could continue reading it....because it was really ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.2.

    I read the first chapter and I just had to keep going!! You can count that as a good sign =). That means its an interesting novel. And when you ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.1.

    Hey! FireBird99 here for a review! I have to say this is a VERY interesting novel. I love how you only release bits of information from the past. That was ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: No more

    This poem was VERY interesting but dark. I enjoyed it...a lot. The formatting was really good and your grammar looks about right too. I like how the first few stanzas ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Where Did I Go Wrong?

    This is a really amazing read. There were a few things that didn't flow but they pretty well posted it down I'm stuck with telling you how good this poem ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: As A Friend

    This was really interesting. It kind of gives an idea that everyone feels. More than once someone could relate to this. There is always someone out there who likes someone ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Love Unheard Of: Chapter 2: The Truth

    Wow that was very interesting. I have read the first chapter and I honestly did not see her being deaf. It was an awesome surprise and it puts a twist ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Love Unheard Of: Chapter 1: Unusual Friends

    Hey! This is a very interesting novel. I really am hooked and want more to read. You kind of left us at a bit of a cliff hanger. Which is ...

    Nov 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Diakrino - The Darkness within (Preface/Introduction)

    This introduction was weirdly cool. It is definitely different then most books. I was a little bit confused when I was reading it, mostly towards the end. When you do ...

    Nov 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Drums of War-Aurora

    From the moment I started this novel I was glued. It was truly very interesting! The only thing is that the first paragraph can be split up in different paragraphs. ...

    Nov 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Me.Prolouge.

    This is very interesting. You just have a few grammatical mistakes but it looks like the others pretty well pointed them out. Just to let you know, you are a ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Culture Re: Masengesho Rodrigue: My sponsor Child.

    I just have to say one thing, well more than one. This story/essay was very inspiring and I thank you for writing it. Everything you said hit right on the ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Life line (chapter 1)

    I really like it so far. You sure did leave us at a cliff hanger though which is a good thing. It intrigues the audience more. The only thing that ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Silence...

    Hey Vibe, I know a lot of others have said this but the first sentence is a little odd. If you do 'there is war....' it would look and sound ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Crave

    First things first, I absolutely love how you put up a picture of a shattered heart. That went perfectly with the poem. This poem is truly amazing and it makes ...

    Nov 17, 2014


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