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Hello, This is a really interesting piece! I love the way it's written, and I love how short yet powerful the idea is. You were definitely able to convey this ...

Hello, This is a really nicely written poem! Your structure is great, your lines flow smoothly together, and you convey a good amount of emotion. I like your concept of ...

Hello, This is a nicely-written poem! I like the emotion that you were able to convey from this... and I especially like the last line. "Your heart is poorly connected ...

Hello, This is a pretty deep and dramatic story Here! It's well-written, and I found that this storyline is relatable. I understand what "Qurbani" is, but the only time I ...

Hello, I can see that you may keep switching from memories to reality in each chapter, and I like that! I also just finished reading a fantasy Wonderland type novel, ...

Hello, This is a well-written poem! I like the way you wrote it, and the raw emotion conveyed from it. I think your ideas of having only one of these ...

Hello, I reviewed the first chapter... and I'm very excited to review this second one! I haven't really reviewed any other chapters, so these are the first ones and I'll ...

Hello, First of all, this is so FUNNY. I was actually rapping this out and laughing through the last few lines lol. Your right, it's cringe, but I really love ...

Hello, This is really nicely-written! Every line flowed together, the structure and vocabulary was great, and you ended off with a really clear message for all of us readers. So ...

Hello, I really like this poem! Though it's short, each line was well-written with great metaphors. The lines also flow very smoothly to the next, so it's easy for us ...

Hello, This is a really well-written story! I love all the similies, imagery and sentence structure. You described everything in a lot of detail, making me feel like I was ...

Hello, I love how this story is written! It has a very mysterious feel to it... I'm wondering a lot of things about this "Phoenix Black". I think it especially ...

Hello, I really liked this poem! It's written on a very emotion-filled topic... and I was drawn in from the first line. I actually think it fits with how your ...

Hello, This is a nicely-written poem! I think the lines flowed well together, and it had an air of mystery to it because we dont really know who this "keeper" ...

Hello, This is a nicely-written short story! I liked the concept of "appreciating nature", and you used a lot of good vocabulary and imagery. It really felt like I was ...