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Re: pedestrian
Hello, I really like this poem! The tone that this poem takes on is sort of bitter, thinking of what human life is really worth when we are all pretty ...
May 4, 2019 -
Re: powerless
Hello, This is really well written! I love the message your have here, and it's portrayed so strongly in every line. Your words sort of dance around the topic of ...
May 4, 2019 -
Re: My love, Must I?
Hello, This is really nicely written! I like the language that your used to makes this sound really poetic. Each line flowed smoothly and I could see what you were ...
May 4, 2019 -
Re: you are my place
Hello, This poem is nicely written! I like the idea of it. It's short, and it has great imagery and comparisons. Each line flows really well to convey a nice ...
Apr 30, 2019 -
Re: I Hate Cancer
Hello, This is a really nicely written poem! The topic it's written about is very deep, and I could feel emotion from each line. I think the imagery was really ...
Apr 30, 2019 -
Re: Love Conquers
Hello, This is a really nicely written poem! I love how you showed a love story from two different perspectives... I think this really enhanced the idea and allowed readers ...
Apr 29, 2019 -
Re: Tangled Web
Hello, I really like this poem! It's crafted together really carefully... and I could feel emotion coming from each line. I think your rhymes are well done, and they flow ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: (x + y)2 =?
Hello, This is a really good story! I was hooked throughout the entire story until the end. Honestly, when I saw the title, I expected this to maybe be something ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Stuck
Hello, This is a really well written poem! Every line conveyed a lot of emotion, and the idea is overall just really relatable. I feel like we've all definitely been ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Two in the Morning
Hello, This is really well written! I could feel emotion coming from each line, and you also used good imagery so that I could picture the whole scene in my ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: [DELETED]
Hello, This is a short but intense poem! You conveyed good emotion in just a few lines... and I didn't expect that ending. I mean, there was already emotion with ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Sorry:
Hello, I can tell that there is a deep meaning to this poem, and I think each line is really powerful in terms of expressing your feelings. Anger, hate... I ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Grace
Hello, This is an intricately written story! I love the idea of "grace" you have here, each line was detailed and conveyed a lot of good imagery. I could also ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: The brain bug.
Hello, This is a really well-written poem! I love the rhymes... each line flows really smoothly to the next. You use really good imagery, and this conveys a lot of ...
Apr 28, 2019 -
Re: Try
Hello, This is a really nicely written poem! I could feel so much emotion being conveyed from this with all of the emphasis you put in every line. The lines ...
Apr 28, 2019
