FabihaNeera

Hello, I like the collection of poems you have here... the rhymes were good and the ideas flowed somewhat smoothly to the next. I liked the first poem about the ...

Hello, This is a really nicely written poem! I like the idea you were conveying here, it was done really well. I could feel emotion from this that a lot ...

Hello, I really like this poem! I think it's really well written... I like the two characters voices that you convey in this. It gives readers more perspective to the ...

Hello, This is nicely written! I like the idea you are conveying in this poem and then the small twist you have at the end. I think what you could ...

Hello, This is really well written! I could feel so much emotion conveyed from each sentence while reading through this, and the topic is definitely something that a lot of ...

Hello, The ideas of these poems are nicely written out! Even though there aren't any titles, I feel like I can make my own interpretation of both of these poems. ...

Hello, This poem contains such deep emotion... I could feel a mix of emotions from each line, especially a lot of anger. Each line gave me a really clear idea ...

Hello, I love this poem... reading through each line just have gave me such a calm feeling. I could really picture everything you were describing! I like the length of ...

Hello, This is a nicely written story.. . It's short yet it's descriptive enough to tell a relatable story. I like how you end off with that line to show ...

Hello, This is a nicely written piece! Your message is conveyed really clearly and it sticks out to the reader in the very first line. I like how you get ...

I love the idea, lol. Super ironic and also kind of relatable... I mean I don't hate poetry but it just takes me a while to think of an idea. ...

Hello, This poem has a nicely developed idea of forbidden love... this topic actually reminds me of Romeo and Juliet which we just finished reading in school! There are many ...

Hello, This is a well written poem! I love the idea of determination to reach the end... and then realizing that we have tbe ability to do it independently. The ...

Hello, I like where this story is going... It's sort of spooky and has a creepy atmosphere to it. You're right, leaving these stories on cliffhangers is probably the best ...

Hello! This is a nicely written poem! I like the rhymes.. each line flows well together. There's a lot of nice imagery in this and I can feel tbe emotions ...