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FabihaNeera

  • Other » General, General Re: [deleted]

    Hello, This is a short but very descriptive poem! I like how the snow was described in a way that used a lot of imagery and metaphors. I think it ...

    Jan 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Deep Breathing

    Hello, This poem is really well written! I like that you describe such a common topic in a way that we can closely relate to. Anxiety is something we all ...

    Nov 15, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Kindness

    Hello, This poem is well written, and you put in a lot of emotion into each line. This poem did a good job of voicing your thoughts and feelings towards ...

    Nov 12, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Empty, Silent, and lost

    Hi, This poem is very nicely written! I love the deep topic you explore of picking at and feeling kinda ashamed of all these flaws... and I like the metaphors ...

    Nov 4, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: What Words Can Never Say

    Hello, This is a really well-written poem! I like the central idea you portray here with such deep and expressive words. I think the title you chose fits in really ...

    Jun 26, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Insecurity Shouts Out of Security.

    Hello, This is a really well-written poem... the idea of it is deep and really expressive. The title gives a clear message of the idea of the poem, and that's ...

    Jun 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Unfriendly Detours

    Hello, This is a well-written story. The idea of "the new girl" usually shows the struggle for that new person to fit in (that's usually what I see), but I ...

    Jun 24, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Writer

    Hello, This is a pretty interesting and suspenseful story! I was hooked from beginning to end... I think you did really well in clearly writing out the plot of this ...

    Jun 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Forgive Me

    Hello, This is a deeply emotional poem! It's really well written, conveying clear emotions of heartbreak, sadness, regret... a lot of things. I think you started off strong and ended ...

    Jun 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Perfection

    Hello, I like this poem! It's short and simple... and it's just really relatable actually! I can imagine just sitting my butt down for hours trying to write a perfected ...

    Jun 24, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Doppelganger

    Hello, This is a really freaky story... I was hooked from beginning to end! I liked the imagery, every description painted a clear image in my mind. The title fits ...

    Jun 21, 2019
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: The Lazy Cheetah

    Hello, I love this poem! It's short yet it's really nicely written. Your rhymes make the lines and ideas flow so smoothly... and it overall just flows really well together ...

    Jun 21, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Distrustful Companion

    Hello, I liked reading through all of these poems! They were all nicely written and conveyed a nice and strong meaning to the reader. I liked how well you expressed ...

    Jun 20, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am bleach.

    Hello, This is a short and nicely written poem! I like the creative metaphor you used to describe your feelings so well. The title portraying the idea of bleach just ...

    Jun 20, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Good Boy

    Hello, This story has a really interesting idea and it kept me hooked from beginning to end. I love mysterious stories... and this one was really well-written. I liked the ...

    Jun 20, 2019


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