Hey, this is the second Cat poem I've read in a row!
Really good poem! I love how you describe the Cheetahs eyes as "Flashing Orbs" There isn't much to really point out, as this poem is really great! The only small, itty bitty little detail I'd like to point out is that "Below the deep blue sky" sounds a little cliché. It might just be my opinion, but I'd thought I'd point that out anyway.
Other than that, this poem flows nicely, and your word choice is amazing! I hope you have an excellent day or night!
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