Young Writers Society

Hello, This is a short but very descriptive poem! I like how the snow was described in a way that used a lot of imagery and metaphors. I think it ...

Hello, This poem is really well written! I like that you describe such a common topic in a way that we can closely relate to. Anxiety is something we all ...

Hello, This poem is well written, and you put in a lot of emotion into each line. This poem did a good job of voicing your thoughts and feelings towards ...

Hi, This poem is very nicely written! I love the deep topic you explore of picking at and feeling kinda ashamed of all these flaws... and I like the metaphors ...

Hello, This is a really well-written poem! I like the central idea you portray here with such deep and expressive words. I think the title you chose fits in really ...

Hello, This is a really well-written poem... the idea of it is deep and really expressive. The title gives a clear message of the idea of the poem, and that's ...

Hello, This is a well-written story. The idea of "the new girl" usually shows the struggle for that new person to fit in (that's usually what I see), but I ...

Hello, This is a pretty interesting and suspenseful story! I was hooked from beginning to end... I think you did really well in clearly writing out the plot of this ...

Hello, This is a deeply emotional poem! It's really well written, conveying clear emotions of heartbreak, sadness, regret... a lot of things. I think you started off strong and ended ...

Hello, I like this poem! It's short and simple... and it's just really relatable actually! I can imagine just sitting my butt down for hours trying to write a perfected ...

Hello, This is a really freaky story... I was hooked from beginning to end! I liked the imagery, every description painted a clear image in my mind. The title fits ...

Hello, I love this poem! It's short yet it's really nicely written. Your rhymes make the lines and ideas flow so smoothly... and it overall just flows really well together ...

Hello, I liked reading through all of these poems! They were all nicely written and conveyed a nice and strong meaning to the reader. I liked how well you expressed ...

Hello, This is a short and nicely written poem! I like the creative metaphor you used to describe your feelings so well. The title portraying the idea of bleach just ...

Hello, This story has a really interesting idea and it kept me hooked from beginning to end. I love mysterious stories... and this one was really well-written. I liked the ...