Eveningstar

Hi Beth. Eveningstar here for a review. I am not sure why, but this poem reminded me somehow of Alice in Wonderland. It had a dreamy lyrical quality to it, ...

Hi tgirl! Eveningstar here for a review :) The first thing I must tell you is that this piece is really well written, very intricate and surprising with every new ...

Hi there. I'm here for a quick review. the bareface quickly dies polka dot red-white-black and dulled spiderwebs of electric blue Raw from rubbing eyes This is beautiful imagery. Spare ...

Hi there. I'm here to review your poem. Well written and precise. A little more elaboration on the various circumstances (good and bad) wherein a knife can be used to ...

Hi Cello, I'm here to review your poem. Firstly, I must say I like your core message in the poem, and how you've adorned the basic concept of the need ...

Hi Fortis. I am here to review your poem. For starters, I must tell you that you have an incredible gift for imagery. Each one of your images is quite ...

Hi DZK, I'm here to review your poem. Overall, I understand the idea behind your poem, and I really think its a very good one. Coming down to the execution ...

Hi there Miraly! I'm here to review your work. Firstly, I must say, this was really funny. Particularly the first part about Tom and Jerry, it had me in stitches! ...

I love you right now! This is one of the rare poems I have read with absolutely perfect rhyme, rhythm and meter. Your expressions and images are beautiful and the ...

Hi there. Here's my review. Okay, so firstly, your language and expressions are both pretty good. The imagery of constant, mind-numbing repetition day after day is quite striking and I ...

Hi prati. I'm Eveningstar and I'm here to review your poem. Okay, so let's begin. Firstly, the theme of your poem is quite unique, and yet universal in a way ...

Hi Silver! I'm Eveningstar and I'm here to review your poem. For starters, I like your rhyme scheme. It's good that you've tried to maintain a constant rhythm throughout the ...

Hi there! I'm here to review this chapter. Now as much as I'd like to, I don't have the time to read the book from the beginning, so for the ...

A brilliantly constructed description of a hallucination! I must say, this chilled me to the bone, but also gave me a newfound appreciation for well-constructed imagery. This was terrifying, but ...

Hi there Spark! I'm here to review your poem. :) There are two main things that struck me immediately as I read this poem. The first is the absolute brilliance ...