EnigmaticSpirit

I have to say I really enjoyed reading this piece of work. Your starting sentence had me enraptured in your story right through to the end. It's so full of ...

Right, first things first, your story needs to be split up into smaller paragraphs, not just one huge paragraph. I've heard that a lot of readers on here will skip ...

Well, what can I say? I really enjoyed reading this piece and I thought it was fantastic. I like your writing style and use of imagery and descriptions. I was ...

This was a really interesting chapter to read. I was hooked all the way through until the end and it was a real page turner. Your use of imagery and ...

This looks like it's going to be a really interesting story and a good read too. I like how you've started off your story and your use of imagery, and ...

I really enjoyed reading this as it was an interesting read! It had me hooked all the way through to the end of the chapter. I think your description of ...

I read both of your chapters and they never failed to crack me up laughing. I really like this chapter and I think your writing style is fantastic! However, there's ...

Okay, first things first. This looks like an interesting story and I don't want to sound too harsh, but there's always room for improvement. First off, your story needs to ...

I really like your style of writing and I think it has potential. It was very detailed and descriptive and the storyline looks very interesting. However, it would have been ...

This is fantastic! I love it! Your language and descriptions are excellent and your story is a page turner. The only thing that I'd suggest though is to add more ...

This is fantastic! I loved it. Your story was gripping all the way and you managed to create an extremely tense atmosphere. Your writing style is excellent and I like ...

This is brilliant. I really enjoyed reading this and I like your style of writing! The prologue is very gripping and is a page turner, which I think is a ...

This is a very good mini saga! Your description was excellent and I like the language you used. I.e. pungent, yearning, malice. You have left the readers to paint the ...

I think this story is excellent and it sounds as if the plot will be very interesting! I really enjoyed reading this and your writing is very descriptive too. You've ...

I like it. It's very well written and the description is enough for me to be able to picture a scene of a small cafe and the two characters, Red ...