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This is very cool and refreshing, personally I find it hard to write happy poetry (I guess I just like being sad or something) and you have gone very well ...

Heya Niccie Christmas Is here, All the lights, all the bells. Sales in shops, and toys all around. Gifts under the tree, The angel ontop. Nativity scenes, And the bonbons ...

I really like this poem exsept for one nitpick And drops softly down on the table, Softly doesn't seem quite right as usually you don't say that liquid drops softly ...

This is such a nice idea although I think you could make the diary entries longer and more detailed as the events seem to be missing some depth to them ...

Thats a real lovely poem exsept I think you should make the ending stronger compared with the rest of the poem like Nature lives in harmony, Humans live in war ...

I am SweetMoments and I am going to reveiw your work. Let me take your hands Nice opening line And free you from all demands Let me take your lips ...

I really enjoyed this poem but it seems to be lacking feeling like you were watching a movie without sound if you know what i'm saying its there but its ...

Hey Jash I'm not going to review this I just want to say that you have a really pretty voice and lyrics are awesome ;) Also could you tell me ...

"Hush, Hush, come join us." Their voices snake around me Those behind shielded eyes, heads turned away, Shuddering, trying to ignore the light. This has an amazing imagery to it ...

This is very short and sweet, quite a cute poem I have no corrections to make. I hope you keep writing poems as there is something there that you could ...

I think you could list them better ect number one, number two and maybe more descriptive with the other reasons although I love the last bit it's really cute about ...

Hi! Real nice poem but the only thing I have a nit pick about is how many ... you use ( sorry can't think of the word for them) using ...

A sweet, pitiful face is what they all see, But I know the truth. I don't think you need but Because behind that mask, I don't think you need because ...

Hi i'm here to reveiw your work it was very nice. I remeber your fumble, the trip, the fall. I remember the laughter, the pointed fingers. I remember it all. ...

I like this poem although slightly short but I think it works for this piece. If this stranger remembers me, he should know my hand is lonely tired of endless ...