Published December 18, 2010
Christmas Is here,
All the lights, all the bells.
Sales in shops,
and toys all around.
Gifts under the tree,
The angel ontop.
Nativity scenes,
And the bonbons go pop.
Such a wonderful time,
and a busy one too.
With cards in my hand,
Merry christmas to you! 
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Thanks guys!
I love the beat to this poem and it's good to get in the christmas spirit, i can't find any spelling mistakes so thats good and i like the grammer 'comma, full stop' it gives it that beat just to make it a bit longer and a bit more feastive maybe you could add in the carols singing or the fake santa on a sligh (can't spell the word) and i think it would pick it up more!
Heya Niccie
I really like this poem very warm and heartfelt, i think you ahould enter it in the december contest!!