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Emotion1405

  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: i should be sad

    This was really good. Kind of highlights life for the average teenager :) I can easily associate with this which is why I enjoyed reading it so much. And the ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: family ! my family !

    I really like this one. Really highlights the fact that even though there might be a hell of a lot going on in life family are still the ones who ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: It's Me. Your Greatest Friend.

    Wow, this is great, truly describes fear. I think it is great how you have described fear as a friend and an enemy and how it is in all parts ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Most Beautiful Melody

    Very short but very effective. That came across to me as if it was meant to show that life is beautiful from the moment it starts, weather it was meant ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: In the Blink of an Eye

    I love this, really puts it into perspective for me how much can happen and change in the blink of and eye. It also puts the question in my head ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: For Only The True

    This is great. I love the way you say "So think how heaven must be" because that just sets me off thinking about what a heaven would look like. It ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Disappointed Love

    Oh my god, great. So deep and meaningful. "Crushing my mind like math I can't solve" That's the best comparison to disappointed love I have ever heard. Love this because ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Light My Cigarette

    That was awesome :) Just makes me think of the warm feeling you get when you are around that one person you care about. A lot warmer than a lighter ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Castaway

    Really liked that. Short but effective. "Brought by a battle of shore and sand" That is just great =D Just makes me think of the shore and the sand battling ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Teen Fiction Re: Angel Wings

    Great. I loved this because it takes away the usual things an angel is associated with such as happened and joy and put the thoughts of sadness in there with ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Time And Time Again

    Great. Reading through that I found a lot of things that I can associate really well with such as the parts about falling short of goals, hopeful thoughts getting wasted ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: bullying needs to stop.

    Amazing. This one really hits home tbh. Nobody should be singled out and bullied. it is cruel. Nobody should ever be made to feel they are not good enough. I ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tears

    Really enjoyed this one because it was so easy to associate with if you know what I mean. Them times where you just want to break down in tears but ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Altar of Sin

    Woah, can't really describe the feeling when I was reading that. Best way I could put it is that it was right up my street :) First two lines made ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: so your thinking about me

    Enjoyed reading this. Really like the "Are you thinking of me?" It's a common question that goes through my mind so I could really associate well with that, especially with ...

    Dec 6, 2013


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