Emerson

I liked it. As always. But: Where this is in the time zone has caught me off guard. After Ch, I suppose, but I just can't place it which made ...

Hee. Dang, I love this. I really do. As much as I want to get back to the current mess that is going on in the present, I love seeing ...

I liked it but.... I can only guess on what the subject might be. Grab a hand for faux parade committing Grand Theft Masquerade. Shall we sing for beauty King? ...

I liked the poem, but I can't exactly find something particular to pick at in its content, etc. It was good, but I didn't get anything from it. But then ...

Wow. It is beyond amazing to see this event through Kyle's mind. And he is so tortured...I could ramble on and on and on about that. It's just horrible, so ...

When will dark come to an end, light will shine and shadows bend? This doesn't really make sense to me, because in the sentence you use the very will twice ...

I agree 100% with Xanthan gum. There just wasn't enough to do anything good. I felt nothing from the poem. It was just...said. Also: punctuate! Without punctuation, the poem is ...

First of all: Panda, Panda, shining bright In the stillness of the night, This might sound a bit off but....since when do Panda bears shine? I thought the "message" was ...

Yeah... I'm just here to sing with the choir. This poem does nothing for anyone but you. Poetry can be two things: an expression of emotions, or a way to ...

I liked the repetition of first letters (the word escapes me at the moment). Those were nice to read. I assume the lack of punctuation and capitalization is purposeful? Though, ...

herm...hmmmm what to say. I suppose I'll first point out the things I noticed right away: read over it some, you have a few typos. Secondly, you are lacking a ...

Rated PG-13 for Language . Next time, remember to rate your work, or else! Now, to the actual critique... I once had a friend, who all ways told me the ...

I love this!!! It is so cute to see kyle and Jon before they met. Jon seemed like such a cute, crazy little kid, and you kept calling him 'boy' ...

Honestly: I didn't finish it. This is a lot like the last thing I read by you, and like the last thing, many things could be fixed. The beginning of ...

conspiracy theories! Exciting. I like how you give us the websites to the documents and so forth mentioned... And the fact that CMP is back...gah I feel haunted! I want ...