ElvenJedi

Heya, Jedi here for a review! First I wanna say that this was absolutely beautiful, and I definitely enjoyed reading it. It's very emotional, and though this is definitely somewhat ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for a review! First off, I really enjoyed reading this, and I like how you used such a simple little story to get the message ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for a review! First off, I really enjoyed this poem-- very simple, but full of emotion. But on to the critique. I'm uguly. A tasteless ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for a review! I really loved this piece, but lets get on to the critique. Imma take this piece by piece, hope you don't mind. ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for a review! First off, I very much enjoyed this poem. Great rhyming--it didn't seem at all forced, and I can tell it wasn't because ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for another review! Although I enjoyed this poem like the rest of yours, the grammar was poor. So let's jump into the critique! I wanted ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for a review! First off, I enjoyed reading this poem and congrats on winning that contest! So anyways, on to some critique. I know it ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here to write a review! First off, I enjoyed this read IMMENSELY! Great job on this! I like how it rhymes--I find that most poetry on ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for a review! First off, I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is a very simple, innocent poem and I like that about it. I ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here to write a review! My apologies that this is a long review, I just found this piece of literature very interesting :) First I want ...

Heya, this is Jedi here for a review! The idea of this poem is abstract, and it has potential, but the main thing I am about to nitpick at is ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for another review! First, before my critique, I wanna say that this was a really enjoyable read. It has a very good lesson, and has ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here to write a review! I really liked the simplicity and random detail of this poem, almost like a long haiku. Every line was simply saying ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for another review! I want to start by saying that I enjoyed this poem very much. It's lack of clichès did wondrous works for it. ...

Heya, this is Jedi, here for a review! I like this poem's meaning, and the repetition of the phrase, "It eats my heart away," strengthens the poem and gives it ...