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Re: The Twelve Protectors Pilot
Hey! So, I think that this is a really interesting concept for a novel and I think that you're going to have a lot of fun writing it come November. ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Looka Da Flicka of My Pearls
Hey there! I wanted to drop in to give you a quick review. I wanted to echo Strange's comments and say that while I think this could be good, right ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Have you ever?
Hey! So, I really like the idea behind this poem. You do a really good job at making the reader connect to the poem. You tug at quite a few ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Angel Reaper
Hey Dragon! So, I liked this. Since you described this as a description for a character, this feels like something you'd obviously want to develop into a more fully fleshed ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Blue Jeans
Hey Morrigan, I really loved this. It's short and sweet and yet it really packs a powerful punch. The imagery in this is especially good. I also love how you ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: Cinderella's Happily Ever Never
Hi, I love Cinderella, and I love fairytale retellings that turn an established story on its head, so I was really excited to see and read this story. The idea ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Unambiguity
Hey Quentin! I really like this a lot. The imagery is wild and powerful and seeps emotion from beginning to end. I felt like I had stepped into your character's ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Secrets
Hey Nargles! So, I like the idea behind this poem. I like that it traces the entire path of a relationship between beginning to end; I didn't see it coming ...
Feb 7, 2015 -
Re: Extract: Messenger
Hey Tenyo! I really enjoyed this. Is this supposed to be a stage play? If so, I like it. The conflict that your characters face is interesting, and this specific ...
Feb 3, 2015 -
Re: Deciding to Die
Hi Guinea, I really like this. The message is powerful one and I think you did a good of portraying it in a resonating way. It's something that can be ...
Feb 2, 2015 -
Re: Puppy love
Hello, So, I like this. It intrigues me. I'm not sure why, but the image of the dancer always makes for some compelling imagery. Because of this, however, there have ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: 100 Years a Wanderer
Hi there, I quite like this. There's a lot of creative work out there about loneliness, but this didn't come across as cliche. It managed to strike a chord, and ...
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Paperboats are a child's dream
Hi there, I really loved this poem. You've got quite a way with words, and the imagery of this was really clear and quite vivid and lovely. Something inside of ...
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Atop the Christmas Tree.
Oh my! This was quite an interesting poem, and not really what I expecting when I clicked on it. Still, I did like it, and thought it was an interesting ...
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Diary Of A Dead Girl (Edited)
Hi, This is really interesting. I've always been fascinated with the idea of short stories that allow us to get inside a character's mind right before they die. And reading ...
Dec 9, 2014
