Guardian speaking--
I just want to start off by saying that this is the most abstract piece of writing that I have ever read or reviewed. I'll try my best to decipher this poem and hopefully shine light upon the fact that you were somehow relating this text to our modern, and quite frankly, social times.
So, I'm speculating that this story relates to the song where the line "Look at the flick of the wrist" is used. I won't correct you on grammar or spelling, as this is a lyrical piece of literature. I liked the new spin on "lyrics" I guess. I've never actually reviewed lyrics before, and to be absolutely honest, this was just a tad bit weird to read. I hope you don't take offense to that, as I know that you must have spent precious time in writing this. I know I said that I wouldn't correct you on spelling, but typically in lyrics, words like "da", "flicka", "hunna", etc would not be allowed. In poetry, misspelling words is alright and acceptable, as poetry has no unified set of rules that everyone follows.
All in all, I just want to say, that it's good to have a diverse range of writing, and I'm glad that you are taking the initiative in writing something like this!
Regards,
Guardian
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