Elijah

Fast kinda useless review here! Hey hey! The shorter lines were kind of ruining it for me while reading out loud.I do it so I feel the pace and how ...

Hey hey! Raindrop here to give you a fast review! 1.I know the punctuation is something you can choose to do or not to do but still I will leave ...

Hello there! I had reviewed all your previous parts so I am here today to do the same for this one. The part is quite long so I will read ...

I saw one lonely piece of writing and decided to check it out. It is quite long so I will review and read at the same time. ------- I sat ...

Hey hey!Here to make a review for you!I hope I help you!Reviewing while reading. My first impression of him was horrible. //very good start, It took my attention. "Valerie, come ...

There are many run-on sentences also ones just not suitable for the part in which it is.The plot and whole story idea is pretty interesting and appealing but as you ...

I do not know why I love this piece of writing!It is pretty basic and simple.The start is a cliché used my many other writers but still you made me ...

Hello,darling!So here I am.The part is pretty long so reviewing during the story. I awoke the next morning with a pounding ache in my head. I rubbed my temples, trying ...

Sorry for the pretty short review but If I had something to complain about It could be longer but what to is pretty good.The punctuation is off but this is ...

This is amazing.Somehow at the beginning i did not think of the music at all or being a violist!Sorry If that is rude but I felt like you can relate ...

It really made me feel interested in this but by the halfway we just started repeating the same sentence?I think you could still use one sentence several times but not ...

I think the punctuation is pretty off in this one but maybe you write in this be honest,from all the reviews I see many are the same and have that ...

It is okey to post it!I do not find it as a failure!I think it is pretty amazing. You did not need any rhyme to catch my eye.The words that ...

I was kind of confused to be honest at the very beginning but it started pulling me in to read it till the end.The way you write and express your ...

I think this story could be longer and you could be more detailed to catch the attention of the readers.You could explain some parts of the whole situation/story deeper? I ...