Elijah

Hello,King here for a review. I hope I help here. I checked the previous reviews and I saw bad and good things, said towards this work. Well, I will still ...

This review will be short, I think, so I will try my best to still help you while we are going through this work you have here. This is the ...

I see you are new! Welcome here and I hope you have a lot of fun! I can still count myself as someone new into this site,but still if you ...

I quite wanted to see more of you and your beautiful works,so this is why I am here for another short (maybe) review to help this work of yours improve. ...

Hello,I see you are here from quite a long time but I still see your work for the first why not reviewing this lovely work of yours? Honestly,your style of ...

Hello,King here for a quick review! I still hope it helps you to improve this work. So,I think of starting with what I like in this poetry: 1.The flow and ...

The rhyme is so sweet and smooth, perfectly put in the work and it did not felt forced at all. I love the feelings put into this work, even if ...

This is a song?! Now I can explain to myself the smoothness and the great flow in this work.Very good job.The tittle of the song is awesome and it is ...

I really like the story and I might even continue reading when you post the next parts of this, but for the next second part, I think you need to ...

This short story is really something different.I did not espect this,to be honest.Something fresh and new? Of course I think it is! At least,I had not seen anything like this.The ...

So bad that I can not give a very good long review because this letter full of emotions is quite the short one,also.I like the way you had described the ...

Such a sad sad and terrible that the boy had been waiting for the girl but the girl did not reply with the same.Unfortunatly,these kind of relationships exist and one ...

I agree with the first reviewer,phangirl :3. The betalking thing sounds kinda odd to me,also,and I would prefer to see it changed.I do not think it is that important but ...

I thought this work makes no sense at all but as an otaku I think of a way to understand this general,this poetry makes no sense for me at the ...

I think this needs some editing so I will try to do it as helpful as possible for you.Welcome in this site.(i saw you are kind of new so).I like ...