Elijah

King Here Hello there, I am here to review you lovely work. I hope I am able to be helpful and help with your improvement. I will correct where I ...

King Here I think that you need to make this story in past tense most of the time. The present tense just makes me feel like nothing is alright. I ...

I really like this work. It shows how sad, depressing and dark your feelings and thoughts are. I hope that you do not feel this way right now. I think ...

This was a really strange read for me but I do not feel that I had done anything wrong as I read this work of yours. I think it can ...

To be honest, I am pretty confused about this. I did not find any punctuation or grammar mistakes, but it is confusing. Maybe the guards are the ones who had ...

I would love to see this becoming a longer and more detailed story. I would love to help if I can, of course also. I hope you start thinking of ...

King Here I found amazing work again?! You are seriously a very talented writer if we talk about poetries or short stories. I had not seen work of your which ...

King Here And here we are looking at the fifth part of this amazing story! I really want you to continue it! ;-;)) pwuse du itttt I will review this ...

King Here Finally reached the fourth part of this story. Happy to see that I have more parts to review even if I see the ends, though. So for this ...

King Here I love the previous three parts of this story, so here to review this one. Unfortuantely, I saw that this is the last part that you had posted. ...

King Here Here for anothe review! I really adore this story, so I continue to review the following parts, even if I think I reaviewed most of the already posted ...

King Here Hello, here to review the following part 3 of your wonderful story. I love the previous two parts, so I felt the need to check this one too. ...

King Here Hello there! I wanted to check the second part, after all, I was really curious what is going to happen with that girl, that is in love with ...

King Here Hello,there. Of course, I am not the first person who is going to review this. Surely, I will not say anything different from the other people who had ...

King Here I see you have plenty reviews already, but I still wanted to say my opinion about this work of yours. i am kind of confused what is Grenly, ...