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Re: Corpses [One]
King Here Hello there, Eternity! I think you are the one who deserves my 350th review enough to make me write this review. I really like this full of sadness ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Lies Of A Storm
I do not find a way to complain about anything at all. The job of his was kind of mysterious at the beginning which was a good mystery hint even ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Best Intentions
King Here I was kind of surprised that is actually ended this way. I do not know if it is for good or for bad but I actually wanted to ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Content
Hello there, fellow writer. Well, this catchy rhyme really caught my eye and made me stay for it. The rhyme starts well at the start but kind of breaks and ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: You and I
Hello there. I can say that I really understand this work fully because of my lack of knowledge about this anime but I had heard a lot about it and ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Car Crash
King Here Hello there, fellow writer. I think that the way you had seperated the parts is not the best one we could think of here. I think they can ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: White Wolf
King Here If this review is kinda the short one, I am sorry at advance. I may not be so good with poems even if I try to. Well, we ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Innocence Lost
Hello there. Well, this was really heartbreaking to be honest. The storyline as whole. The topic was not one to be missed either. I do not think I have read ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Bay Beach Girls #1: The Rescue *Chp. 4*
King Here Glad to see another amazing part of your story. Even though, I am kind of disappointed. As the other reviewer before me had pointed out, nothing really caught ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Bay Beach Girls #1: The Rescue *Chp. 3*
King Here This part was very interesting! I like that you really had showed us more from her past and what connect her in some kind of a way with ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Bay Beach Girls #1: The Rescue *Chp. 2*
King Here Well, this part was more exciting than the previous one. I found some nitpicks but they are nothing too much to be honest. I think they can be ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Bay Beach Girls #1: The Rescue *Chp. 1*
King Here Hello there, beloved writer. I really like the start and think of continuing to read this story. I can not officially say that I am interested in this ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Mothers Day
All this was usual, but she got through it without complaint. complaint ➡ complaining She wasn’t a fan of celebrating mothers. mothers ➡ mother's/mothers' Kassah’s best friend, Ren was well ...
May 27, 2016 -
Re: Tables
Hello there. ~ (Great name you have there) So, before I faint because of lact of sleep, I want to say that this work just kind of started and ended ...
May 27, 2016 -
Re: Goddess
I really like the way you start describing everything but it kind of confused me. It was kind of strange for me to see that you do not finish the ...
May 27, 2016
