Elijah

Hey there, Eli here for a bday rush! I love the way you maybe on purpose rhymed the last two sentences in your first paragraph. I like the way you ...

Hey there, Eli here for a birthday rush! I want to say beforehand that this review will be mostly edits as I am very strict with my commas, you do ...

Hey there, Eli here for a bday rush! I am bad at commenting on very short works as I do not what to say really but I hope I am ...

Hey, Eli here for birthday rush! The story was amazing! I do not like aliens stuff honestly but this one was so funny and interesting, so calm around the main ...

Hey there, Eli here for a birthday rush! I feel like this story will grab and I hope I find it published soon, I would love to be notified when ...

Hey there, Eli here for a quick sweet review for your work! I am so happy to see something that is not forced or pushed to be rhymed, stays with ...

Hey there, Eli here for a review! I expected it to be emotional and realistic and it really was, you caught my attention with true story of your own self, ...

Hey there, Eli here for a review! The previous reviewers have their rights to point out things that I also have noticed in this work. It is short and maybe ...

Hey there, Eli here for a review! This was so emotional that I felt like crying. Emotional stories like this will forever make me feel the feels thanks to their ...

Hey, Eli here just as requested to review prt three of the first chapter! I am glad you give us shorter parts of one chapter so I give my whole ...

Hey there, Eli from Team Marlins here for a review! I have not read previous parts of this work which I might correct but this is actually the first one ...

Hey there, Eli from Team Marlins here for another review! I saw that you have second chapter, or let's say some kind of a sequal to the first part that ...

Hey there, Eli here from Team Marlins for a review in the last minutes of our lovely month's review day! It will be pretty to be honest as this is ...

Hey there, Eli here from Team Marlins on this review day! Why I find so many relatable things to read and reviews today, I really do not know, maybe this ...

Hey there, Eli here from Team Marlins on this review day! I have no complains when it comes to grammar, you nailed it! But I want to talk about the ...