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ElectraHeart

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sick

    Sarai here for a review! So I really enjoyed this poem, it has a nice flow and is an easy read. But maybe you could italicize the questions so the ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: Dreams

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    May 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Nosferatu

    Dead person here to review, as requested! OKAY! This poem kinda makes me feel like it's about someone who is depressed/suicidal. I really like it though. The parts that make ...

    Apr 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I fell in love with a boy in five inch heels

    I'd just like to say, thank you for posting this. Let me just admit something now. I cried. This poem was just so beautiful and honestly, I've never cried at ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: If I let you Love me...

    Happy Review Day! Love your fanfic poetry! Don't see that often. Haha, anyways, to the review! I really like this poem and only have a few little problems with it. ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Anxiety

    Happy Review Day! I'd just like to say that this captures an anxiety attack beautifully. All the emotions and feelings of one are in here. This is just so wonderful. ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Title

    Happy Review Day! Love this poem, it's really nice! Kind of sounds like it's go under the lyrical category. I like this poem because it flows very nicely. The words ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life

    Happy Review Day! I think I'll try something new and review this by stanza! So bear with me in this. 1st stanza: I like how you show that they're star ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the same poem since january

    Happy Review Day!!! Overall I really like this poem. The meaning your giving off is just beautiful, it's just a beautiful poem in general. Your last four lines confuse me ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Light from the Storm

    Here to review! First off, amazing and beautiful poem. Your poem flows very well. If I was to read it out loud it would flow nicely off the tongue. This ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Covered with Dust

    Here to review! This is a beautiful poem. It flows quite well, I just know that if I was to read this out loud it would be very easy to ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Angel on Earth

    Here to review! First what is fluff? Just a little curious. Is it like, the cloud? I think that personally you shouldn't repeat this: The images I want to shatter ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: As We Get Older

    Here to review! Okay, so first off I'm a little curious about the *'s you use. (I'm not sure what they're called.) But I don't undertand why they are there? ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why don't you?

    Here to review, like a mad person! I would like to start out with a round of applause! This is a very beautiful poem. So, the poem flows very easily, ...

    Mar 11, 2014


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