This poem made me happy to say the least. Personally, I enjoy free-verse and I believe the author should be able to organize his/her poem any way they choose. My favorite part was the first stanza because it was a very cool analogy and it made me feel special. I also like the third stanza. We have minor victories every day, and even if people aren't there to witness them it doesn't make them any less important. My only criticism is that maybe you should make the rhyme scheme a little more stable. Your rhyming pattern is all over the place and if you made it a little more standard to go along with each stanza I think it would benefit the whole poem. Overall, good work. I can't wait to read more from you.
Points: 252
Reviews: 12
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